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Maisie
We all inhabit the body we are sent but that does not mean we should lose sight of the soul - enquiringly beautiful. Love the two line repeat - if I close my eyes..... the second line I love.
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I really enjoyed this a lot and gave it some karma. Its very strong from the first 2 lines. I liked it very much, great tone and great thinking involved here. Thank you.
View ArticleFerg
I really like the feel of this piece. Nicely constructed! I liked the way it evoked emotion as I read it and stirred deeper thoughts within me.
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Thank you Cordell, for reading and liking it. There is so much more to each of us than we can ever imagine.
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Thank you Ferg, I hope those deeper thoughts were pleasant ones. we seem to spend the adult part of a lifetime finding oursleves.
View ArticleJRNightingale
Got to agree with Cordell a very strong poem. Like the repetition of the beginning and end. A joy to read.
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